En el que Estefanía y yo nos burlamos de Kubo Tite

Hablando de las respuestas a fanmail de Oda:

sirius_licker: And Carne is taken directly from the Spanish word for meat. <- y asi es como se utiliza un diccionario japones-español lalalala
Kirisame: MUAJAJA
Kirisame: pues no, tía, lo hace mal! debía ser El Carne Jugosa
sirius_licker: es solo un nombre y quedas bien
sirius_licker: LOLZ
Kirisame: a que no imaginas a alguien en Bleach llamado El Carne Jugosa?
sirius_licker: XDDDDDDDDDD
Kirisame: que es parte de un nuevo grupo de Gary Stus llamados Parrilla
sirius_licker: omg xDDD
Kirisame: y la gente lo shippea con alguien llamado Guakamore
sirius_licker: XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

ETA:

Kirisame: sí hay una tía en los Parrilla. se llama Pechuga y tiene tetas copa E
sirius_licker: xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
sirius_licker: no puede ser mejor "La Pechuga"?
sirius_licker: queda mas...... cool
Kirisame: no. Pechuga de Polla

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And now THIS is a flame

Horrible, horrible, horrible. Poor and wooden exposition for *three*
chapters? I realise one can't avoid placing down a little groundwork
but for God's sake, this is ridiculous. If nothing else, Clow is such a
person to wish for Kaho to discover certain things for herself. It
would have been better to have him set her tasks of a sort, so that she
learns that she herself holds the answers already.

Nice premise, shitty execution.

But...

People who have read my E/K fic up to chapter 3, does this person actually have a point? I'm trying to think about it, but I'm fearing I might stick to my subjective logic and disagree with it forever.

Because, you know. I'm trying to think any moment Clow (as in Clow, not Eriol; maybe the reviewer confuses them?) wanted anyone to figure things out by his/herself. Let's see, uh... Sakura? Got her important explanations from Kero, Syaoran, Yue, Kaho, the Eriol-tachi. Clow always provided explanations to Sakura through people. The only person related to Clow who figures a big part of the picture, although not with the whole details, by his own was Touya, and Clow never had that much of a plan for him -or at least beyond giving Yue his magic, if Clow had known that.

Kero and Yue never figured things by themselves, would always find out about Clow's true schemes through the Eriol-tachi, and their memories were altered -more than once, in Yue's case- so they could never.

This is the people Clow loved and trusted. If he never wanted them to come up with answers on their own with no external help, why would he give a damn about bell-bearer Kaho, future reincarnation-girlfriend or not? He and Eriol can't figure out hearts for shit, so would they know she's capable of coming up with the answers on her own?

Also, we don't know how strong Kaho's clairvoyance is. I've thought long about it before writing this fic, and considering Kaho has sported a WTF face more than once during the Final Judgment, I doubt she could be able to figure everything by herself (with or without Eriol's explanations.)

And also, I find know-it-all!Kaho so boring and Sue-like. The Clow affair is messy, and most of the involved people could only understand the big plan after everything is done and you've heard everyone's story. If not even Clow Reed knew how everything would out to be... why would random shrine maiden Kaho Mizuki, who's described as much as an absent-minded person as she's insightful?

Dunno, that's the logic I used for my plotbunny. Obviously, if the reader's interpretation of the characters involved in my Eriol/Kaho is strongly against it, it might look "shitty", "ridiculous", and "horrible", I guess.

...That's what I'm trying to tell myself, but now I'm wondering if this person's not-flame part of her review does have a point, and my fic's exposition is truly that horrible and OOC for Kaho and Clow/Eriol. What do you, two people in my flist who read this fic and some other CCS fans, think? I need some outside perspective on how to take this. Be honest.